Sex and Relationships in Time Braid

It seems that about every thirty or forty reviews I get a complaint that there's too much sex in Time Braid, which I admit has me a little puzzled. Indomitable has a lot more explicit sex going on, but it hardly gets any complaints at all on that score. Maybe it's just that Time Braid starts with everyone being twelve, and it doesn't spend enough time describing their process of growing up? Or maybe the way they get dumped back in their younger bodies every loop generates some squick factor? Or maybe this is really just a request for more action and less touchy-feely relationship stuff? If anyone has an idea I'd be interested to hear it.

Back in Business

Well, I'm finally writing again. I've finished a first draft of the next Time Braid chapter, and hopefully more will be coming soon. I've noticed that switching fics every chapter was starting to seriously slow me down as my stories get longer, so I'll probably be doing the next several chapters of Time Braid in one stretch before I go back to another story. Who knows, I might even finish the thing :).